First attempt at haiku 

The day you went numb                                    We started talking                                   Your eyes speak a lot …

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Recently I learnt about haiku and i wanted to try my hands on it ,so the first thing that came in my mind was this.Can this be considered as a haiku ,your feedback is appreciated 😊

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